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Jerusalem Falls....AerisVampire

  Author:  56410  Category:(Poetry) Created:(10/16/2004 9:17:00 PM)
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Wow, haven't posted anything in FOREVER! Here's a little semi-Stream of Consciousness poem I wrote. It's strange, but whatever. I kinda like it. What do you guys think?

Tonight there's a girl 'round whom the world falls
And broken Jerusalem weeps.
A prayer is all, 'tis all she can keep.
Where is my God? Where is my mercy?
Find me a star in the handful of dust
Show me your fear, and fall if you must.
Where is my God? Where is my love?
My idols have died, and broken they lie
No star in the dirt or the dust.
Where is my God? Where is my Hell?
Candles snuffed, Without hope to be
Eight days, a miracle; but not one for me.
Where is my God?
And why has he forsaken me?



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Date: 10/17/2004 12:03:00 AM  From Authorid: 16671    Very good.  
Date: 10/17/2004 10:38:00 AM  From Authorid: 37038    intense poem great writing!  
Date: 4/26/2005 3:11:00 AM  From Authorid: 53961    Very well written and electric.  
Date: 4/26/2005 3:50:00 AM  From Authorid: 28946    It's very beautiful and so much sadness and yearning are pouring out from this. He does hear you and gives one of three answers always.  
Date: 4/28/2005 10:22:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 56410    Thanks Paula and Penny! I got two replies on an old poem, I figure I should say something. Thanks to you both, I really appreciate the comments, especially on a lot of the work I haven't really thought much about. Penny, I'll message you <e  

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