Date: 5/13/2003 3:14:00 PM
From Authorid: 62140
I really really like this! This is awesome! Keep writing! ~*CoCo*~  |
Date: 5/13/2003 4:04:00 PM
From Authorid: 55386
Wow. This is AMAZING!!!!!! Wow! I haave felt like this so many times, and for it to be put into words just makes me want to cry. Actually, I am ver close to it!!!! This was amazing, and VERY well written. I loved it. The line that REALLY captured me though is the I hate love, so I let it hate me....That line really captured the whole essence of this. Thank you for writing down what I have felt, because I have tried many times! Great job and keep writing!!!!!!!  |
Date: 5/13/2003 4:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 35720
I remember when I felt this way.. way to express yourself. Write on..  |
Date: 5/13/2003 6:51:00 PM
From Authorid: 42568
"Only 10 replies" you know how lucky you were to get 10 comments to a poem? Enough of that. I liked this poem mainly because I could relate. This poem left me to wonder a few things though. Do you really believe that other people's thoughts on you sculpt who you are inside? Aren't you in the corner of darkness because you put yourself there willingly? I could keep going but I'm sure I would only bore you. I just believe that too often humans allow themselves be victims in a moment of weakness... and further on until they get some sort of comfort. "I HATE LOVE," is a strong emotion to have. One of the reasons that I could think of to make someone 'hate' love is if that love betrayed this person; the writer. That happens to all of us, and I personally can say that it has happened to me. I wrote a poem and posted it here on USM titled, "Love is a punsihment." I wrote it in a time filled with pain and look back on it to gain insight of who I was/am. I think you'll be able to do that with this poem once to "recover" from the emotional bruisings you have encountered. A poem that can get me thinking is a great poem to read; and well worth it.  |
Date: 5/15/2003 6:19:00 PM
From Authorid: 8024
more reason to live is the way I look @ it ... I live in the street ... I have nothing to eat, I had to leave the only thing in the world that ever meant unconditional love ... my daughter madeline 8 years old, I've lost my job, my livelyhood was said to be no more when I fell 25 feet, I have 7 brothers and sisters a mom and dad Not one will speak a word to me ... I hitch hiked accross the country running away 7-8 times already ... I lost friends to murder and suicide and I've cried every single day for the last 65 and counting ... I can't see clearly any more ... I got whacked by a thug ... I hoven't a penny to my name and no way of knowing how I am going to get a penny unless I find it .... I been sexually abused and tortured by some of the sickest people I 've ever met ... I can't think of a single reason not one single reason to kill myself ...The thought never comes to my mind not even jokingly I have a relationship with God ... Jesus cares I know that ... I'm not going to die I pray ... I Love life I wouldn't trade a single minute of my life never ... The simple things in life bring the greatest pleasures ... try some sometime ... your writing has an incredible amount of emotion and hurt if life is really making you feel this way right now Please get your self some help and start noticing how beautiful this world really is ..... 28 prayers your way cc  |
6199 Category:(Poetry) Created:(5/13/2003 1:27:00 PM)