Date: 3/11/2003 4:16:00 PM
From Authorid: 55970
Good story! I liked it!  ~Tara~  |
Date: 3/11/2003 6:44:00 PM
From Authorid: 35720
OMG I LOVED THIS! Great writing, it was the best story I ever read on USM!  |
Date: 3/11/2003 7:13:00 PM
From Authorid: 51070
I'm glad Heather finally realized her mistakes and regretted it. This was a very good story. Maybe you should write one from Lisa's point of view.   |
Date: 3/11/2003 7:19:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 45684
Thank you all so much for reading my story. That's a good idea, Creepy Freak. I might try it. I have another idea forming in my head. I hope you all will read it when it finally comes out  |
Date: 3/11/2003 7:56:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
Tachnicolor, I waited until I had read all of this story before commenting on it, not only because I felt it would be quite worthwhile, but also because I don't think I could have registered a comment without busting the computer, so angry I was at Heather (I am a nerd myself). :P You commend you on this story. I sincerely think it has got to be the best fiction story on this site.. You truly are a master with emotion, and you show your characters as real people, and that in itself is an awesome thing for a writer to do. Again, I applaud you for this story, thank you for posting it here. Keep writing and I will keep reading.  P.S. It is better for a work of art or writing to provoke any emotion, whether it be positive or negative, than for it to be looked upon with indifference.  |
Date: 3/12/2003 1:41:00 AM
From Authorid: 59418
Wow, this was an amazing story!! Thanks so much for sharing it with ys, i enjoyed reading it a lot! you are very talented...Write on metal princess  |
Date: 3/12/2003 8:29:00 AM
From Authorid: 45876
good story I likeed reading it.  |
Date: 3/12/2003 10:12:00 AM
From Authorid: 62003
Wow this was a great story, I really like the way you developed the characters and the honesty they brought to the story. Keep writing your a natural. Lily Fairy  |
Date: 3/12/2003 12:19:00 PM
From Authorid: 48989
awesome story dude! i read it right from the 1st part till now, the finale. keep on writing, ur a fantastic writer!!  |
Date: 3/12/2003 4:14:00 PM
From Authorid: 6558
This was a great story. I really enjoyed reading it! Let me know next time you write another story!  |
Date: 3/12/2003 5:32:00 PM
From Authorid: 59940
So she committed suicide?Sad!! .That did not have to happen...Congrats on writing a great story,Technicolor!Your characters seem so real,you can believe they were real people and not just characters in a story!!FE  |
Date: 3/12/2003 6:06:00 PM
From Authorid: 16614
WOW! Absolutely thrilling! I give it 1,000,000,0000 thumbs up! =-P PLEASE, continue to write! This was a great story and you had me glued 2 my seat from Part 1! Plz MSG when u post your next series...Alwayz,  |
Date: 3/14/2003 9:21:00 PM
From Authorid: 13969
GReat story!!!!!!!! I was really suprised when Lisa ended up alive  |
Date: 3/17/2003 8:07:00 PM
From Authorid: 31048
OMG!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!! This was the best story ever! You should seriously get try to get this published  |
Date: 3/22/2003 3:58:00 PM
From Authorid: 49269
wow, that whole story was sooo good! i cant wait till u write another one!!!  |
Date: 6/30/2003 9:56:00 PM
From Authorid: 56359
This was spectacular! Wonderfully written, and thought out. It dept my attention the whole way through. Thank you for posting it!-screen_writer-  |
Date: 8/23/2003 2:07:00 PM
From Authorid: 1799
wow.. this was an amazing story.. thanks so much for sharing it with all of us.  |
Date: 8/23/2003 3:51:00 PM
From Authorid: 56293
Technicolor - This is one of the best (If not the best) story I have read in awhile. You have such an awesome talent. I enjoyed this story sooo much!   |
Date: 8/23/2003 4:30:00 PM
From Authorid: 31765
Excellent. I have no criticisms to make because I enjoyed this read very much (I know, lotta help I am lol) Keep up the good work. I think the stongest character in this story was in fact Heather. Her character brought out true dislike for her, and that's a good gift to have as a writer and shows a strength. Job well done And I still hate Heather lol..  |
Date: 8/23/2003 9:48:00 PM
From Authorid: 36994
Seriously! Gasp! What a great story! The one thing I noticed though was that I can assume that their are no people in this world that think this way, but then I can also assume that you can expect pretty much anything! Reminds me of the movie 'Jawbreakers' Have a lovely night and I'm glad I was able to read this story, so many great stories out there, hopefully I'll catch most of them in the Readers Club!  |
Date: 8/24/2003 2:32:00 AM
From Authorid: 28946
Oh. I hope she didn't end her life! As long as she realized the problem, she could have tried to change. Tech, this was an awesome story and you have true talent.  |
Date: 8/27/2003 9:20:00 PM
From Authorid: 45948
O WoW!!! I am absolutely speechless. This was wonderfully written and a touching story. I give this 10 stars!!!!! Love,  |
Date: 8/28/2003 6:46:00 PM
From Authorid: 54532
WOW great story I really loved it!  |
Date: 9/19/2003 4:14:00 PM
From Authorid: 55386
I loved this story!!!! I always try to tell people that being popular isn't everything.... I should know, I was once popular, but I realized how I put down my soon to be best friend was just rude, and bad. I now and an artistic goth nerd. But do I care? No! Lol. Wow, did Heather kill herself or something? Because the ending gave me that impression....Also, you used the name Heather....heeheehee that's my name Thanks for using my name lol. Great job and keep writing!!!!  |
